WRITING ASSINGMENT 1
ART AS ANOTHER FORM OF ENTERTAINMENT IN INDONESIA
I prefer arts to be developed as another form of entertainment in Indonesia because of the benefits and Indonesia’s current situation. We can say that Indonesia is fully supported by its culture and lifestyle demands. Nowadays, people tend to find some kind of relaxation and aesthetics activities between their busy times so they might be able to loosen the pressures but still in a prestigious way. Besides that, the culture itself allows arts to be appreciated in appropriate way because most of them are cultural heritages. However, global influences also make art choices more rich in Indonesia, even there are some combination between the folks and moderns so people might choose based on their needs. In spite of everything, the benefits of arts make it worthy to be developed as people might get positive effects physically and mentally from it. Usually, arts demand a peaceful or creative situation therefore people body will also get the impact.
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Just wondering.. does it have to be this short? I feel like you can expand it a bit more and make it more convincing.
(I was invited to the group "Susan for Ms. LSPR 2010", and the page has the address of this page. So, I stopped by and felt interested in some of your writing) sorry for being random :)
Hi, Alex! Thanks for the comment. Hm, well, it actually depends on the inquiry...In this case, I was asked to write a short essay for the exam which the words were limited (I forgot how many words). =)
Btw, I didn't pass the audition (Ms. LSPR 2010). too bad..Anyway, thanks for the support. I really appreciate it.
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